高考英语满分作文 1
what is beautiful, people like to wear beautifulclothes,if we print some colorful pads of some wordson clothes will become more meaning of the words on them must be lovelytoo. I am sorry to say that some people pay noattention on please look at the in the new jacket looks pretty theEnglish words on the jacket are quite think a snake is beautiful?Do people take a pride been a personal. of course not. and onother two jackets are writing kiss me and you think the girl is the girl knowthe meaning of words on probably will not buy suchjacket. So I think everyone shouldknow what is beautiful and what is not.
什么是美丽，人们喜欢穿漂亮的衣服，如果衣服上有五颜六色的图案和文字，那衣服就更加美丽了。但是，衣服上的文字也必须美丽。我想说的是许多人不注意衣服上的文字。请看这张照片，这张穿夹克的`女孩看起来很美丽。但是，她衣服上的文字却不美丽。你认为蛇美丽吗?你认为人们会因为成为犯人而骄傲吗，当然不。其他两件夹克写的是亲我，以及傻瓜。你认为这个女孩傻吗。如果女孩知道这些文字的意思。她绝对不会再买这些夹克。所以，我认为人们应该知道什么是美丽，什么不是。
2023高考英语写作优秀范文选（新课标I&II卷+全国乙卷+甲卷） 2
今年的作文都不走寻常路，没有模板可套，只有实打实的写作功底和知识储备的比拼。你觉得以下这四套卷的作文题，哪一道最难呢？如此灵活的写作考法，2024考生应该如何应对呢？
新高考Ⅰ&Ⅱ卷
假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 说明问题；
2. 提出建议。
注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
# 审题 #
1. 体裁：看似一篇建议信，但不是一篇单纯的建议信。
2. 要点：
①表明目的并说明问题（目的：表达对随机分组的担忧；说明问题：语言障碍、学习目标不一致、缺乏动力等）；
②提出建议（考虑英语水平、学习动机、性格特征等）；
③ 简短结尾，期盼考虑，并希望得到回复。
注意：
1. 问题和建议之间要有过渡；
2. 语气要委婉得体；
3. 提的建议要针对问题。
优秀习作展
2023全国乙卷
学校英报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能，请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括：
1. 简要描述；
2. 体验和感受。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
Learn a new skill
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# 审题 #
1. 体裁：记叙文
2. 要点：
①简要描述（学了什么技能，简述学习过程）
技能可以是：唱歌、画画、乐器（钢琴、手风琴等）、体育项目（乒乓球、游泳、潜水等）、手工（剪纸、刺绣等）……
②体验和感受（收获：培养了创造性、提高了解决问题的能力等；感受：开心、自豪等）
优秀习作展
2023全国甲卷
你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 人物简介及事迹；
2. 意义或启示。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 题目已为你写好。
The Historical Figure in China
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# 审题 #
1. 体裁：短文
2. 要点：
① 人物简介及事迹
② 意义或启示
注意：需选择历史人物，而不能是当代人物。
优秀习作展
面对越来越开放的作文，2024考生要从两点进行突破，作文满分不是梦！
1
怎么做到有话可说？
通过创设不同的话题情境，独立思考，下笔去写，才能在任何话题下都言之有物，言之有理；
2
如何表达精准？
积累常用的话题词块、衔接功能词，整块输入整块输出，让语言表达更地道准确、更有逻辑性。
超详细的分类汇总话题、词块和写作功能词，均可在《高考总复习全效新方略》中获取。
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高考英语满分作文 3
Advertisements appear everywhere in modern society. When you walk along the streets, you can see large boards with pretty girls smiling at you. You read newspapers, and see half of the pages covered with ads. You turn on TV, and you see commercial advertisements again. Whether you like it or not, advertisements fill your life.
广告在现代社会中无处不在。当你走在街上，你可以看到大的董事会与漂亮的女孩在你微笑。你看报纸，看到有一半的.网页上覆盖着广告。你打开电视，你看到商业广告。不管你喜欢不喜欢，广告填满你的生活。
In order to attract more customers, advertisements will sometimes go to extremes. Advertisements use every possible means in producing their announcements. For example, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will employ an actor to sit at a table and eat up their seemingly delicious food product while they film him.
为了吸引更多的顾客，广告有时会走向极端。广告在制作公告的过程中使用各种可能的手段。举例来说，要做广告，广告主会雇用一位演员坐在一张桌子上，吃上他们在电影中的美味食物。
Although advertisements enable you to make decisions quickly, sometimes they can cause lots of trouble. There are always many of them and they make you forget what you are sitting there for.
虽然广告让你快速做出决定，但有时他们会给你带来很多麻烦。他们中有很多人，他们让你忘记你坐在那里的。
高考英语满分作文 4
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. Targeted at cultivating the teenagers’ interest in scientific exploration and encouraging more students to throw themselves into research, a competition, titled the World Adolescent Robotics Competition, will take place in the Children’s palace Tianjin in the late July. The competition offers adolescents a good chance to show their talents and initiative and learn from each other meanwhile.
I am eager to invite you to join our team for the upcoming event, in which you will demonstrate your ability and make acquaintance of more friends with the same interest. As far as I know, you have proved yourself by carrying off some prizes in the previous competitions. Impressed by your teamwork spirit and talent in this field, I am confident that you will love the challenge and our team. By working in a group, we are able to overcome our weaknesses by acquiring others' strong points as well as double our achievements.
If you are interested in it, please let me know and I will deliver the training program to your online mailbox. It would be fantastic if you could bring up your advice, which is bound to be of great use for us. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
高考英语满分作文 5
My dream house is a villa which lies on the coast. There are two yards in the villa. The front yard is a garden with many beautiful flowers an plants for the four seasons. There is a swimming pool in the back yard, as my family are fond of swimming. On the first floor, there is a big hall when you enter the gate. On the right of the hall is a sitting room, there we can relax, have a rest, watch TV and enjoy entertainments. On the left there is a computer room and a study belonging to me. On the second floor, there are six bedrooms with bathrooms. The villa will be equipped with the modern equipment, such as security alarms controlled by computers, vision phones, lifts an automatic doors. Well, that is my dream house.
我梦想中的房子是建在海边的一幢别墅。有两个别墅庭院。前院是一个有很多美丽的.花的植物在四个季节的花园。后院有一个游泳池，因为我的家人喜欢游泳。在一楼，有一个大厅，当你进入大门。在大厅的右边是客厅，在那里我们可以放松，休息，看电视，享受娱乐。在左边有一个电脑室和一个属于我的书房。在二楼，有六间卧室和浴室。别墅配有现代化设备，如电脑控制的安全报警器，可视电话，电梯和自动门。嗯，那是我梦想中的房子。
高考英语满分作文 6
The table above revealed an overall picture of employment satisfaction. Based upon the data of the table, most people under 40 are unclear or dissatisfied with their job, and 64% of those between 40 to 50, are not satisfied and no one feel satisfied at all. For people over 50, the degree of satisfaction largely exceeds the other groups, amounting to 40%.
上面的表格显示了一个整体的就业满意度。根据表格的数据，40岁以下的人不清楚或不满意他们的工作，和40的人在64%到50之间，不满意，没有人觉得满意。对于50岁以上的人，其满意度在很大程度上超过了其他群体，达40%。
Such difference may be rooted in the following reasons. First, middle-aged people face more pressure to support the family, both the children and the senior, so that they neglect to enjoy in work. Second, the senior citizens has developed a lot in personality, so they are more prone to see the optimistic aspects of the work. Last, the conclusion that the current society patterns pose more challenges to the middle aged group under 50.
这种差异可能是植根于以下原因。首先，中年人面临着更多的压力，以支持家庭，无论是孩子和老年人，使他们忽视了享受工作。二、老年人的性格已经发展了很多，所以他们更倾向于看到工作中乐观的一面。最后，结论认为，当前社会形态对中老年群体的挑战是50岁以下的.。
To sum up, the senior citizens enjoys more content than the young and middle-aged people under 50.
总的来说，老年人比年轻人和中年人有50岁以上的内容。
2023年英语高考作文题出炉 7
2023 高考各卷英语作文题目陆续出炉。
2023年高考英语命题依据高校人才选拔要求和普通高中英语课程标准，按照“方向是核心，平稳是关键”的原则，结合中学英语教学和备考实际，坚持落实立徳树人根本任务，引导学生德智体美劳全面发展，在深化基础性考查的同时，突出关键能力考查，发挥高考的育人功能和积极导向作用。
全国甲卷
有一个以英语讲述中国故事为主题的征文活动，请以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物事迹；2.意义；3.启示。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li Hua
全国乙卷
(考生回忆版) 请以向学校英文报投稿的方式，用英语描述学习一项新技能的经历，及从中获得的体验和感受。内容包含：
1. 学的新技能是什么；
2. 分享心得感悟。
注意：
1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 题目和首句已为你写好。
天津卷
作为交换生去英国学校，学校要办一个促进中英文化交流的活动，名为：Chinese worksshop. 活动内容包括中国美食手工艺品和书法，活动有一项是教别人做中国传统的东西，请你写一封申请信，阐述这个中华文化交流活动的意义，以及你想教什么、为什么想教这个。
北京卷
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友 Jim 正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括:
1.活动形式;
2.活动内容。
注意: 1.词数 100 左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
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新课标Ⅰ卷
第一节 (满分15分)
假定你是李华，你校外教要举办口语培训班，让练习口语的所有的学生两人一组练习，随机挑选两个人分成一组练习，你对此有意见，说说原因和提建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
新课标Ⅱ卷
与2023年全国新课标卷Ⅰ相同
Dear teacher,
I hope this email finds you well. I wanted to share some concerns and suggestions regarding the upcoming spoken English training program where students will be paired up randomly for practice.
While I understand the intention behind random pairing, I believe there are certain drawbacks to this approach. Firstly, not all students may have the same level of proficiency in English. Randomly pairing students without considering their language abilities could lead to imbalanced practice sessions, with one student dominating the conversation while the other struggles to contribute. This might hinder the progress of both students and discourage those who are less confident in speaking English.
Instead, I propose an alternative method of grouping students. Considering their proficiency levels, we can pair students of similar abilities together. This way, each pair will have a more balanced opportunity to engage in meaningful conversations, enabling both students to practice and improve their speaking skills effectively. Furthermore, by working with peers of similar proficiency, students can provide constructive feedback and support each other's learning.
To implement this suggestion, the teacher can conduct a brief assessment or ask students to self-assess their language abilities. Based on the results, pairs can be formed, ensuring compatibility in terms of proficiency. This approach will create a more conducive and equitable learning environment for all participants.
Thank you for considering my concerns and suggestions. I believe that by implementing a more tailored approach to pairing students, we can enhance the effectiveness of the spoken English training program and provide a better learning experience for everyone involved.
Best regards, Li Hua
上海卷
假设你是明启中学高三学生吴磊，你校英语节即将举行主题为“快乐童年”的展览，邀请每位同学提供一件生活中的物品参展，并撰写展品介绍供参观者阅读。你会提供什么物品?写一篇物品介绍，内容须包括:
1)对该物品的简要描述；
2)你选择该物品参展的原因。
My Childhood Treasure - The Colorful Kaleidoscope
Introduction: Hello, everyone! I am Wu Lei, a senior student from Mingqi High School. I am thrilled to present my cherished childhood item at the upcoming English Festival exhibition, with the theme of "Joyful Childhood." The object I have chosen to showcase is a colorful kaleidoscope, which holds a special place in my heart.
Description: The kaleidoscope is a cylindrical tube, about six inches long, with a small eyepiece at one end. Inside the tube, there are several tiny mirrors arranged in a triangular pattern. At the other end, a rotating chamber holds colorful beads, crystals, and glass pieces. When you look through the eyepiece and rotate the chamber, a magnificent world of ever-changing patterns and vibrant colors unfolds before your eyes. It's like a magic portal into a whimsical wonderland.
Reason for Selection: I have chosen the kaleidoscope as my exhibition item because it represents the essence of my joyful childhood. This enchanting toy was a constant companion during my early years. It provided endless hours of entertainment, sparking my imagination and opening my eyes to the beauty of the world.
The kaleidoscope taught me important life lessons. Each twist and turn of the chamber brought forth a new combination of shapes and colors, reminding me that life is full of possibilities and surprises. It taught me to embrace change, to adapt to new situations, and to find beauty in every twist and turn of my own journey.
Moreover, the kaleidoscope symbolizes the power of perspective. Just as the tiny mirrors inside the tube reflect and create mesmerizing patterns, it reminds me that our perspective shapes our reality. It encourages me to approach challenges with optimism and to see the world through a lens of wonder and curiosity.
In sharing my kaleidoscope with others, I hope to evoke feelings of nostalgia, inspire a sense of wonder, and remind visitors of the simple joys of childhood. I believe that by appreciating the beauty of our own unique experiences, we can find happiness and create a more colorful world for ourselves and others.
Conclusion: In conclusion, the kaleidoscope is not just a toy from my childhood; it is a gateway to a world of imagination and wonder. Its ever-changing patterns and vibrant colors taught me valuable life lessons, encouraging me to embrace change and approach life with optimism. By sharing my kaleidoscope at the "Joyful Childhood" exhibition, I hope to inspire others to rediscover the magic and joy that lie within their own cherished memories.
Thank you for your attention, and I look forward to welcoming you to the exhibition.
Sincerely, Wu Lei
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高考英语满分作文 8
Everyone has his dreams, but not all these dreams can come true. People give up their dreams for this or that reason. Those whose dreams become true have at least one thing in common, that is, they always hold fast to their dreams.
每个人都有自己的梦想，但并非所有的梦想都能实现。人们放弃了他们的梦想，因为这个或那个原因。那些梦想成真的人至少有一个共同点，就是他们总是紧紧抓住梦想。
Marie Curie, a famous scientist, has set a good example. In 1898, Marie found a new element in the pitchblende. In order to prove her discovery, she must get it and show it to the world. Then to get the new element became her dream and goal of her life. After four years'' hard work and refinement of tons of pitchblende, Marie and her hus-band at last saw the dim blue light of the new element -- radium. Her dream had come true. There are many other examples. Just around us, for instance, the athletes who gain the gold medals, the artists who are popular with the public, and even the students who enter tile university after years of hard study and preparation, are all dream-holders.
Hold fast to your dreams, no matter how big or small they are. The path to dreams may not be smooth and wide, even some sacrifices are needed, but hold on to the end, you ,sill find there is no greater happiness than making your dream come true.
居里玛丽，一位著名的科学家，已经树立了一个好榜样。1898，玛丽发现沥青铀矿中的一个新的元素。为了证明她的发现，她必须得到它，并显示它的世界。然后，让新的元素成为她的梦想和她的生活目标。经过四年的艰苦工作，细化成吨的沥青铀矿，玛丽和她的丈夫最后看见昏暗的`蓝色光的新元素——镭。她的梦想成真了。还有许多其他的例子。就在我们身边，例如，获得金牌的运动员们，那些在公众中很受欢迎的艺术家，甚至是那些在经过多年的努力学习和准备之后进入大学的学生们，都是有梦想的人。
紧紧抓住你的梦想，不管他们有多大。通往梦想的道路可能并不平坦，甚至有些牺牲是必要的，但坚持到底，你，你，你的梦想是没有更大的幸福比让你的梦想成真。
高考英语满分作文 9
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What’s more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
I’m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.
Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
高考英语满分作文 10
April 12 is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately.
Some were digging holes. Some were carrying and planting young trees. Others were watering .
After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving we took some photos to record our green action. Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment.
高考英语满分作文 11
In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
The Student Union June
高考英语满分作文 12
Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
高考英语满分作文 13
Today is my grandpa's birthday. Our family went back to my grandpa's home in the morning. We got together to have a big family dinner to celebrate his birthady. We bought a big birthday cake and gave some presents to my grandpa.
In the afternoon, we went to the park to go boating. We had a good time. My grandpa had a nice time on his birthday.
今天是爷爷的'生日。我们全家早晨回到爷爷家。我们举行了一个大型家庭聚会来庆祝他的生日。我们买了一个大生日蛋糕，并且送给爷爷一些礼物。
在下午，我们去公园划船。我们玩得很开心。我爷爷过了一个愉快的生日。
高考英语满分作文 14
To attract young people in the first place we must supply them with interesting magazines and books．I suggest a poster outside announcing subjects 0f interest，such as music，films，video，football and So on．Magazines should be Sold at a special introductory price for first—time customers．Once they have come int0 the shop they will then see the 0ther attractions．
Operate an exchange program where they can trade old books for new ones at a special price．
Install a Youth section in the shop where books and magazines interesting to them are on show．Invite them to come and sit in the comfortable chairs provided．to meet their friends and look through books and magazines．
高考英语满分作文 15
I am Li Hua, I am writing to tell you something about my plan for the coming summer vacation and I also want you to do me a favor.
In order to get some practical experience, I am planning to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company. I have already finished my job application and personal resume. But this is the first time that I have written an application and the personals resume, so I don’t even know if there are something to pay attention to. So, I’m writing you the letter , hoping you can give me some help. I will be very grateful if you can help me.
Looking forward to your reply. And I’d be really thankful.
Yours，
Li Hua
我是李华，我写信告诉你我的暑假计划，我也希望你帮我一个忙。
为了获得一些实际经验，我打算在一家外资公司做兼职工作。我已经完成了我的工作申请和个人简历。但这是我写的申请和个人简历的第一时间，我甚至不知道有什么要注意。所以，我写信给你，希望你能给我一些帮助。如果你能帮助我，我将非常感激。
期待你的.回复。我真的很感激。
历年高考英语满分总 16
试题回顾
假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客，发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件，内容包括：
1. 到达时间；
2. 合适的礼物；
3. 餐桌礼仪。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
本文是一篇电子邮件类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点：
一、内容要点要齐全：
1．到达时间；2．合适的礼物；3．餐桌礼仪。
二、时态：
主要用一般现在时和将来时；
三、人称：
第二、三人称。
四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型，以提高作文的水平；
五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。
1. 浏览信息要点。
2. 三个任务点，第一段内容：问候对方，马上呈现对方所涉及的话题，拜访中国家庭，做客时间的要求和忌讳! 第二段内容：做客拜访的合适礼物，可以适当延展，初次拜访，亲密朋友之间拜访，二次拜访，家庭情况适合的礼物，通用的礼物等。第三段：table manners,可以描述两三个通常的中国人的餐桌礼节和忌讳的地方，有鲜明特色之处，最后一句表达祝愿。
3. 时态，给对方的建议和说明，用一般现在时，描述风俗礼仪这是客观规律性的东西，用一般现在时。
4. 头脑风暴短语、句型结构，开始打草稿。
5. 行文。
6. 检查拼写和语法。
【满分作文】
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? Learning that you are about to pay a visit to a Chinese friend and confused about the Chinese customs, I am writing to put forward some advice.
Firstly, I would 1ike to suggest that you arrive 5 to 10 minutes earlier, which is common in Chinese traditional culture. Secondly, if I were you I would bring some appropriate gifts with me, such as souvenirs from my own country. Besides, table manners are also what you should pay attention to. For example, you are not supposed to stick your chopsticks into your food. Instead, laying them on your dish is a smart choice.
If you have any other problems, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
【素材积累】
做客礼仪：
1. 预先约定一个时间以便对方事先作好安排。如果事先已经约定好了时间，就应遵守约定，准时到达，如需提早十分钟二十分钟之内可以接受，不要迟到，以免主人等候，也不要太早到，以免主人未作好准备。这是一个基本礼节问题。
2.如果有专属地域文化特色的礼物是最好的。如果朋友家有长辈，带点烟酒和茶叶或一些老人家用的保健品等；如果朋友家有小孩，带点儿童玩具或买箱牛奶，然后加点茶叶啥的；不要送钟、梨、伞等这些东西，被认为不吉祥。
3.主人会请客人入座上席，再请长辈入座客人旁。入座的时候要从椅子的左边进入。在中餐结束时，筷子应整齐地放在靠碗右边的桌上，并应等客人们都放下筷子以后，主人示意离席后方可以离开，不能自己吃完了放下筷子就走，这样做是很没礼貌的表现。
常用词语和句子
准时：on time/punctually
餐桌礼仪：table manners
合适的、恰当的：appropriate
拜访：
pay a visit to
You are supposed/expected/required to do…
It' s a good idea to…
It' s appropriate/suitable to do …
It' s sensible/reasonable/advisable to do …
It' s good manners to do …
It' s noteworthy that…
I think it would be more helpful if you could do…
It would be wise of you to…
It' s desirable to do …
It' s inappropriate to do …
It' s impolite to do…
It' s unwise/inadvisable to do …
Never （助动词/系动词/情态动词）主语+谓语动词…
It' s not suitable for you to do…in such a situation.
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试题回顾
你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together，内容包括：
1. 短片内容：学校的发展；
2. 放映时间、地点；
3. 欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
写作点拨
英语书面通知的时态应该以一般将来时为主，多使用被动语态、简单句。在通知中不应当过度的使用较复杂的词语和读起来拗口的句子。
第二个注意点：层次一定要清晰，一个层次要表达一件事情，使人看起来一目了然。
满分范文
Notice
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please? Recently, an outstanding movie will be shown in our campus. Welcome to join us end enjoy it! Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing together, which is about the development of our beloved school; as a result, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it will be in the library from 2:00 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th . What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
Hopefully, you would make it to our activity. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
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试题回顾
假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信，内容包括：
1. 学校的体育场馆；
2. 主要的运动项目；
3. 你喜欢的项目。
注意：
1. 词数100左右：
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
本题作文为提纲式作文，形式依然是书信，即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况，属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际，学生并不陌生，有话可说。
首先可以介绍学校的体育场馆，场馆的位置，大小，开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育项目有哪些，可挑选一到两个做详细介绍，如学生的活动时间，活动形式，以及此类活动的好处等。再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么，并简单分析喜欢的原因，自己从中得到的益处等。文章可主要采用一般现在时态，第一人称的方式来写。
满分范文
Dear Peter,
I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.
To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has become the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, I’m intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the challenges in my life.
All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.
Yours,
Li Hua
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试题回顾
假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：
1. 口语能力：
2. 相关经验；
3. 应聘目的。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写应聘信。
第一步：根据提示可知，学校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信，内容包括：1.口语能力：2.相关经验；3.应聘目的。
第二步：根据写作要求确定关键词（组）。
第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
满分范文
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What's more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
I' m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills. Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
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试题回顾
读后续写：阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afermoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove me up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don't be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don't get lost!" “OK!" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late aftermoon sunmixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven ( 编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
思路点拨
读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息，不仅能读懂字面含义，还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时，考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上，考生要顺着文章的思路，根据线索，发挥想象，对其后的情节进行合理预测，并用语言表达出来。
通过阅读所给文章可知，父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活，见父亲和叔叔骑马，儿子也很想骑，于是亲身上马体验。
根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点，可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开，可以写马的反应，也可以写人的反应，但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭，可从如何寻路返回农场去写。
续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
满分范文
Suddenly a lttle rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the 1eft to avoid the ittle rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, Hoid on! All of a sudden the horse began to run My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!
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试题回顾
假设你是晨光中学的机器人兴趣小组组长李津，你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校，他曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖。你打算邀请他加入你的团队，参加即将于7月底在天津举行的世界青少年机器人技能竞赛。请根据以下提示代表兴趣小组给他写一封电子邮件。
（1）比赛的时间、地点；
（2）邀请他的原因；
（3）训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Yours,
Li Jin
思路点拨
本篇书面要求写一封邀请信。写作的时候要注意以下几点：
一、动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。内容要点包括：
1.代表兴趣小组发出邀请；
2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；
3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；
4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。
二、写作时注意准确运用时态，对于本文来说，以一般将来时为主，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
内容要点
1. 代表兴趣小组发出邀请；
2. 介绍比赛的时间、地点等安排；
3. 说明邀请他的原因，包括Chris 曾在机器人技能竞赛中获奖；
4. 告诉他训练计划将发送其邮箱，请他提出建议。
满分范文
Dear Chris,
I have good news to tell you. The World Adolescent Robotics Competition will be held in Tianjin at the end of July. Hearing that you once took part in a Robotics Skills Competition and won an award, I, on behalf of the Robotics Hobby Group, intend to invite you to join our team in the coming competition. I am sure that your involvement will not only help us in winning the award but also enhance the friendship between our two schools.
With this email I also send you our training plan, about which I wish to get your advice because you are more experienced than us. We sincerely hope that we can participate in the competition as team partners.
I' m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Jin
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试题回顾
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文化感兴趣，计划明年来北京上大学。他向你咨询相关信息。请给他回邮件，内容包括：
1. 表示欢迎；
2. 推荐他上哪所大学；
3. 建议他做哪些准备工作。
注意：
1. 词数不少于50；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
Yours，
Li Hua
思路点拨
本文为提纲式作文，文章要求写推荐信，为英国朋友介绍北京的大学。首先可以介绍一下写作背景（Jim对中国文化感兴趣，要来中国学习），表达欢迎。然后推荐一所大学，并简要介绍推荐的原因（如大学的特色，可以学到什么等）。再次简单介绍应该做哪方面的准备，如可以提前学习汉语，读点有关中国传统文化的书，了解中国的习俗，让自己更好地适应中国的生活。文章可采用一般现在时，人称可以使用第二人称。
满分范文
Dear Jim,
I' m so glad to hear your future education plan in Beijing in your last letter. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable experience during your college in Beijing.
Learning your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking University, one of the best universities in China. Its Chinese Literature major is, perfect for you where you. can be completely soaked in Chinese profound history and rich culture. As for preparation some reading in advance in needed like The Story of the Stone while some online courses of spoken Chinese can be helpful for you to adapt into the Chinese language environment.
I sincerely hope your dream will come true and it’s my pleasure to show you around in Beijing when that day comes. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
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试题回顾
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述你们上周接待外国学生，带领他们体验中国茶文化的过程。
注意：词数不少于60。
思路点拨
本文为图片介绍类作文，这类作文是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所提供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛，可以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。按照本文的要求可知，是写一篇记叙文。
1. 认真读图，把握中心。
根据提示可知，内容是带领外国学生体验中国茶文化的全过程，介绍了茶具，泡茶，沏茶，品茶的过程，所以这是这组图画所要表达的中心。
2.初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。
在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。本文是讲述上周发生的事情，故事态要以过去时为主，人称是第一人称，尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。
3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。
运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。
4.反复审核，修改错误。
一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。5.宜详则详，该略则略。对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容，看其是否影响文章的内容。
满分范文
Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.
On arriving at the tea house, the foreign students were impressed by the unique tea pots and tea cups. I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety, and the exquisite craftsmanship of making tea with their interest greatly sparked, I then began to teach them how to make tea.
In order to deliver a clear presentation, I slowly explained the traditional procedure of making tea in detail. Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture and they couldn’t help taking pictures from time to time.
Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves. Washing the tea pots, adding tea leaves, and pouring water into the cups, they followed my instructions and were really immersed in charming tea culture. The tea house witnessed a really enjoyable time for all of us.
At the end of the activity, holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day. It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value. And I swelled with pride to spread our own culture to people all over the world.
【亮点说明】
巧妙使用定语从句，提升了文章档次：
Last week, we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea culture, which turned out be to extremely rewarding.
使用非谓语动词，使句子表达更简洁：
On arriving at the tea house…
I gave them a vivid and informative introduction of tea culture, including its profound history, its rich variety,
Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once again amazed by this unique culture
holding the tea bags in our hands, we took a picture to memorize the unforgettable day.
使用倒装句突出重点。
Next came the moment when I asked them to have a try themselves.
使用it做形式主语，使表达更地道。
It suddenly hit me that traditional culture like tea culture was of great charm and huge value.
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试题回顾
请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
写作内容：
1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名( ratings)进行消费的现象；
2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。
写作要求：
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3.不必写标题
评分标准：
内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。
思路点拨
先用30词概括阅读材料，然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料，然后进行比较和分析，表明态度，作出价值判断。
文章首段要简要介绍两段材料，第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论，结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一帮人去餐馆吃饭，看了on-line rating，结果饭菜很不好吃，从而凸显出online rating的不靠谱。
然后写你对online rating的看法，表明观点，注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。
文章属于议论文，要注意主题句的使用，论点之间要注意有条理。文章可主要采用一般现在时，第三人称来写。
满分范文
Possible version one:
As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.
Possible version two:
Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
高考英语满分作文 17
As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.
I tend to consult consumption ratings whatever I purchase. Firstly, the higher rating means the higher quality of the product, or better service. Based on the ratings, I bought my beloved backpack, saw interesting films and tasted delicious foods. Secondly, ratings can save time to make decisions in shopping. For example, there are huge amounts of reference books which I am often confused to choose from. In that case, it is both convenient and economical to buy books according to the ratings.
There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.
Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.
There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.
Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.
高考英语满分作文 18
Dear Terry,
How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, you’d better bring some gifts, like a book or a Chinese knot. What’s more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.
Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua