第1篇:考研英语满分作文经验及模板
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前言:
笔者19考研,英语一91分,翻译加作文扣3分,因此作文分数27+
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这里主要介绍一下考研英语写作的方法,英语一和英语二兼适用,虽然几经删减控制,但由于干货内容比较多,便于大家对照理解,也保留了其中的以自己所写文章举例论证的部分,所以文章还是有点长,大家如若能抽个20分钟左右时间把这篇文章消化,应该对于快速掌握考研英语写作有所裨益。关于英语考研经验贴知乎上也有很多了,我这里也写了一下我的英语应试速成方法技巧,希望对广大考研同学有所帮助:
考研英语中,大家都默认阅读是重中之重,所谓“得阅读者的天下”,其实阅读总分40分,作文的总分也有30分,同样是很能够拉开差距的部分,实践证明,与考研英语其他题型一样,历年考研写作真题是考研专家命题组集体智慧的结晶,具有十分重要的参考价值,众多考题经常反复重考。1991年以来,英语一写作大作文以图画作文为主,主要类型为社会热点、人生哲理、教育文化、环境保护四大类为主;英语二大作文则以图表作文为主,题材围绕经济、管理、教育、文化等话题。英语小作文(2005年开始考察)则以书信类和告示类的应用文为主,其中书信类又分为介绍信、投诉信、感谢信、建议信、邀请信、道歉信、祝贺信和推荐信等。
而在市面上,关于英语写作的教辅也有很多,如潘赟老师,还有何凯文老师、王江涛老师、朱伟老师的考研英语高分作文,据了解应该是各有千秋,相对来说王江涛老师更侧重于分析考题变化和趋势,总结命题规律,其次整理了不少精选的高分作文,而其他三位老师更侧重于通过真题剖析讲解写作的具体方法,比如行文结构,文章分几段,每段的内容是什么,每段的语料怎么组织,怎么润色等…我选择的是王江涛老师的《考研英语高分写作》,因为我认为单纯地通过一家之言总结出来现成的方法难免有一些“拿来主义”,而且如果掌握不深刻则很难投入实用,因此我基于大量优秀高分甚至满分案例的基础上,再结合各名师的一些核心技法,总结出了自己写作的方法或者说“套路”,让我能够在50分钟以内的时间快速面对任何题目写出一篇好的文章,在此过程中,由于大量的仿写和模拟练习,也总结出了对应试来说比较有效高分范文模板。下面我将首先介绍一下考研英语写作的主要方法,最后后附上整理的英语模板的获取方式。
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三大英语作文写作方法:
首先,我们来看一下考研英语作文阅卷的标准:从考试大纲的要求来看,大作文的评分重点在于内容的完整性,文章的组织连贯性,语法结构和词汇的多样性以及语言的准确性。因此对于内容我们不需要去追求新颖,只需要做到相关即可,能够自圆其说就行。而结构上只需要合理分段就可以了。我们的写作重心应该放在语言上。因此可以得出这样的结论:从重要程度上讲,考研大作文写作最重要的是语言,其次是结构,最后才是内容。
因为我是在11月开始准备作文的,可能并没有在整个复习阶段去积累、朗读或是培养语感,事实上,在短期内有目标性针对性练习是提高作文分数的一个更为高效的方法。对此很多同学有一个误区,认为考研作文就是靠背诵常见类型,再重点背诵默写冲刺预测的题目就万事大吉了,在我考研的教室中,正是有不少同学拿着整理的优秀文章反复默背或抄写,其实这往往落入了一个舒适区的陷阱,这样每天不断地进行简单的誊抄,每天一个小时“输入”工作的努力感动了自己, 但却感动不了阅卷老师,当你面对一道全新题目的时候,如果你没有在练习中从“舒适区”转移到“学习区”,那么英语写作这种从无到有的工作你恐怕无从下笔。给大家推荐的方法是对于范文,我们不光要抄或者背原文,而且在看过一遍后要看它的中文逻辑,分析一篇好的文章是怎么展开的,有一些固定结构是什么,常见的一些内容又是如何填充的。
这个时候,就需要掌握写作的模式了,我其实不喜欢叫模板,写作模式是提前整理出一份属于自己的规律化固定化的材料,这份材料已经固定好了思路、框架、以及供替换的论点,上了考场后驾轻就熟地快速完成作文。自己要用这份材料至少写完部分真题,以检验自己这份材料的有效性。为了方便大家理解我把写作的模式用下图进行表达。需要注意的是,比起飘忽不定,没有套路可言的满分作文来说,这种模式是一种常规化的方法,在结构和框架上或许并不出彩,但很容易将很好的词汇、语句等内容嵌套进去,也能够实现文章的增亮。
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那么以历年的真题为例,接下来对常见的三种文体,应用文、图画作文、图表作文,详解对应其写作模式是如何展开的。
1.应用文
题目:Part A
Directions:
Write an email to all international experts on campus, inviting them to attend the graduation ceremony. In this email you should include time, place and other relevant information about the ceremony,
You should write about 100 words neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not use your own name at the end of the email. Use “Li Ming” instead.
大家先花2分钟看看这个题目,正如你所看到的,其实英语小作文的要求比较简单,一般会告诉你明确的目的和写作内容,所以写小作文时,仅需完成“文体格式+基本套话+具体内容”就可以应对,其中在第二段展开的具体内容包括“要求内容+扩展内容”两个部分,这往往需要恰到好处的想象力,补充一到两句即可,在训练多了之后我发现也可以从固定的方向去进行发散。那么看看我是怎么来写这篇文章的:
第一段:Dear sir or Madam,
I am a senior from the Office of Student Affairs, and I am very pleased to inform you that the 2020 Graduation and Degree Conferring Ceremony of our university will be held at the auditorium from 9:00 to 11:00 on June 28th.
(第一段一般先写称呼,如果是本文中的上级写Dear sir/madam,如果是同龄,则是Dear friend 或Dear Jack,如果明确了身份,则可以是Dear editor、professor等;然后是自我介绍+写信目的)
第二段:With your remarkable expert knowledge, you have contribute a lot to the development of our university and the growth of our students. So I sincerely extend to you an invitation to this ceremony. We will be greatly honored if you could be present at the grand ceremony, to witness this important moment in our students’life. And, on the occasion, there will be volunteers guiding you to your seat.
(第二段往往是需要我们针对主题扩展一些内容,比如关于会议的具体流程和安排,或者对受邀教授的感激之情,亦或者是对于会议的重要性和意义的介绍啊都可以,在平常的练习中需要培养我们扩展的角度,其实这一段内容只要合理就可以,并没有太多限制,同时要保证信息覆盖题目要求)
第三段:We look forward to seeing you at this ceremony and to having you as important members of this event. If you accept this invitation, please advise us of your time of arrival, so that we can make necessary arrangements.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
(第三段基本上就是一些套话了,比如“In the end”再次表示请求/祝福/夸赞等,或期待您的回复,如若及时回复将不胜感激等,注意落款的固定表达)
2.图画作文
题目:Part B
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Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
(1) describe the drawing briefly,
(2) explain its intended meaning, and
(3) give your comments.
You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.
大家先花2分钟看看这个题目,漫画其实寓意并不难,两个人的态度有明显的对比,所以我们可以选择主题为“乐观”、“积极”、“心态”等,对于大作文而言,审题正确是最主要的,其次还要注意书写清楚,字数恰当,结构合理,四个正确(语法,拼写,标点,格式),两个多变(词汇,句式),固然审题虽然重要,但同学们也不用太过于纠结,其实在阅卷时老师对于选题的角度还是有很大宽容度的,只要不太偏一般都能接受,老师也不希望阅了一千份试卷,都是同一个主题词反复出现,但是如果偏得过了,那就是踩雷区了,可能直接扣10分以上。
我们再说大一层,这道题目的类型属于人生哲理类(参考前文总结类型),那么其实很多内容都可以套用固定的模板,比如自信啊、坚持啊、独立啊都可以采取同样的方式展开论证。那么看看我是怎么来写这篇文章的:
第一段:As is shown in the picture, two men react in distinctly different manners when they see a bottle get tipped over and half of the water spill. Wearing a glooming look, one man covers his forehead and curses his luck, complaining, “ it’s all gone”. While the other smiles and hurries to set it back up. We are informed that various folks take different attitudes toward the same occurrence.
(第一段主要内容是描述图画和总结图画,首先固定语句如图所示,表达方法有As is shown in the picture/ As is symbolically demonstrated in the cartoon/ As is symbolically illustrated above…有很多表达,我均收集在了模板里面;然后就是描述图画,其实这一部分内容是在文章的最前面,如果描述得比较好那么会给老师奠定一个很好的印象,因此我们在语法不出错的情况下,要注意句式、词汇的运用,尽可能有所增色,基本上图画的内容可以从人/物+动作+状态进行描述,比如图画中的两个人,一人+抱怨说到全完了+带着沮丧的表情,另一人+赶紧拾起瓶子说还剩一点+脸上带着微笑,如果像这种有两个人的图画,分开描述后通过and, but, while进行顺义连接就可以了;最后是总结图画,用一句简单的套路总结一下如 We are informed that …./ It is apparent that …/ straightforward as the drawing is, it is loaded with sobering meaning. 这时主题词应该出现,奠定好文章的主题)
第二段:This portrayal reveals that in adverse situations, being optimistic or being pessimistic directs people towards opposite paths. Just as Alexander Bell puts it:”When one door closes, another opens; but we often look so long and so regretfully upon closed door that we do not see the one which has opened for us.” When obstacles confront us, assuming the worst spells more failure, while interpreting them in a positive light always spurs us to look for a silver lining and concentrate upon addressing problems.
(第二段的内容比较核心,也是字数最多的一段,看似困难,其实这里告诉大家反而有套路可循,本来第二段就很长,你觉得阅卷老师会仔细斟酌吗,只要有合理的论述展开,有一两句亮点就足以让老师打高分。围绕主题展开的角度可以像上文一样用名人名言+正反论证,也可以用更常见的In the first place, in the second place, last but not least 或者on the one hand, on the contrary…等等,这样列出几点,既可以用正反利弊论证,也可以用因果论证,如果这样,那么会怎么怎么样,还可以用统计事实论证,也可以联系现实举例论证,如举有名的事例或研究结果来论证等等,一般来说几种方法,在自编的模板书里面也详细介绍了图画作文的六种论述方法,任选其二,两两组合就好,在第二段最后,可以适当小结,推荐用强调句一句话进行总结,如It is optimism that inspires us to finish an arduous task.)
第三段:In conclusion, being optimistic enables people to behave wisely, kindly, and confidently, and it is also crucial for any individual’s development, in terms of both character and competence.
(第三段相对来说同样比较固定,如若时间有限,完全可以简要结尾,内容包括:归纳总结+建议措施+憧憬明天, 所以可以In conclusion /therefore/ to sum up/ from the proceeding discussion作为开头,然后强调一下主题的重要意义,这里可以穿插一些名人名言,as the saying goes;最后再说我们应该怎么做,或者只有这么做,我们才会迎来怎样光明的明天,亦或者如果我们不这么做,终将付出怎样的代价;有些情况下可以省去建议措施部分。最后,给大家提个醒,这非常重要,有部分同学最后一段几乎就全部摘抄固定模板,什么*应该制定政策啊,媒体应该报道啊等等很多无关且千篇一律的语句一出,让老师发现是套作,很有可能前功尽弃,所以虽然最后一段比较套路,但该有的主题词应该明确出现,总结和建议都应该围绕主题展开。)
3.图表作文
题目:Part B
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Directions:
Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should
(1) interpret the chart and
(2) give your comments.
You should write at least 150 words.
Write your essay on the ANSWER SHEET.
首先,只是说大概率英语一考图画作文,英语二考图表作文,但考纲并没有明确,因此建议同学们都做好两手准备。同学们先花两分钟看看这个题目,作为大作文,其实图画作文和图表作文有很多的相似之处,结构、框架以及很多写作方法都是共通的,只是图表作文在描述手法上面有所不同,并且主题更贴近经济、产业和生活实际,相对来说更加客观,在审题上的发散性没有图画作文那么大,我们还是秉持“三段论”的写法,那么看看我是怎么写这篇文章的:
第一段:What is shown in the column chart above indicates different market shares of automobiles of three types of brand affiliations between 2008 and 2009. In 2008,cars with Japanese brands topped the three types of vehicles,accounting for 35% of the total market. What follows is the cars with Chinese brands,hitting 25% of the auto market,with the share of American brand bottomed out at 15%. In 2009,some developments are noticeable in that the cars with the largest share became those of Chinese brands,which occupied roughly 32% of the market,while cars with Japanese and American brands took 25% and 15% of the whole market respectively.
(第一段同样是描述图表的内容,无需发表评论,具体则是指国产、日系、美系品牌汽车在2008年和2009年销售情况的变化和具体数据。美系品牌汽车两年间基本没有变化,但国产汽车与日系汽车相反,前者所占的份额上升,后者所占的份额是下降的。图表作文写作的时候需要首先描述出变化的内容,然后接下来主要分析一下造成这种现象的原因,需要引起注意的事情等。)
第二段:There are at least two fundamental causes accounting for these changes. On the one hand, advancements in science and technology have offered a technical foundation for the rapid development of the Chinese automobile industry by providing material basis and technical means. Meanwhile, it won’t be difficult to notice these days that national automobile companies in mounting numbers turn to price promotions to boost sales. On the other hand, the dishonest words and behaviors of Japanese automobile corporations such as Toyota in recent years cheapens their image and finally ruin their reputation.
(第二段可以列举发生上述变化的原因和背景,对于柱状图对比和折线图变化都可以从原因进行展开,对于一些其他类图表,则可根据其反映的现状问题作出评论,具体方法同样是正反利弊论证或现实案例论证等,相对来说,图画作文在第二段论述中90%的情况可用因果论证的手法,另外10%则主要是对比论证,原因可以从内外两个方面,因此又可以我们熟悉的on the one hand, on the other hand进行分点论述)
第三段:From this graph,we can come to the safe conclusion that the Chinese automakers are doing a good job in outcompeting their Japanese and American counterparts in 2009, but the gap is not so significant and if no efforts were made from the part of the Chinese auto industry,the distribution map might be rewritten in the future.
(第三段的主要内容同样可以是归纳总结+建议+展望,如对国产轿车品牌如何保持并继续扩大市场份额提出建议,对未来的汽车市场份额提出展望等,当然这时最好也需要上升到一个高度,比如从提高质量延伸到发展科技,鼓励创新、品牌效应啊等等)
上述我举了三个真题作文的例子给大家剖析了考研英语写作的模式,基本上给大家确立起来了“结构”和“内容”的思维方法,但是还需要大家去整理,收集好词好句,好的语料和“语言”是提升作文分数的关键,一篇不出错的文章顶多15分(满分20分),如果没亮点,拿什么去打动老师去给你多打几分?而这个亮点,如最开始所说的,不在于结构,不在于构思,甚至往往不在于逻辑,而是在于语言。句式变化,表达地道,衔接巧妙正是你考研英语作文所要抬升的最后一个台阶,为此我也准备了相当多的应试模板。
最后,大家在写作完成后,养成检查的习惯,特别是时态,人称单复数以及语法等,一个明显的错误会拉低整篇文章的形象和质量,所以我们在练习的时候,随时记得提醒自己,并养成快速检查的习惯。再提醒一下大家,背得再多,整理的再多不写下来也没啥用,而是要当做素材运用起来,不管是自己整理的模板还是书上的模板都要放到作文中去练,不要光抄、背,同时也要结合我所讲的方法和自己的积累多写,这样才能完成输入(舒适区)到输出(学习区)的转化。另外在最开始的框架中也讲到,书写和卷面也很重要,大家在目前还有时间,可以参照网上推荐的字体练习英文字帖,推荐手写印刷斜体,每天抽空多练习一下,同时卷面上应少出现明显的涂改痕迹,有些老师在阅卷累了过后难免也会根据“颜值”来决定对作文的印象。
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方法和技巧很重要,但却不是万能的,有了明确的方法之后,就是不断的练习和提升,在这过程中你会明显感觉到自己的进步,你也可能会在阅读和运用中感受到投入的快乐,从基本的英语写作应试到自己写出高分优秀范文,也需要经历这一过程。
而在这之前一定要有目标和信心,仰望星空,脚踏实地。
Excelsior.
第2篇:英语满分作文,涵盖高考话题 3
第十一篇:【写作要求】
Mary在学校参加了一个Buddy Club, 从那以后,她改变了很多。请你结合下面所给的提示,写一篇英语短文。
In the past
Now
Personalities
shy, quiet, get nervous easily
brave, outgoing…
Hobbies
reading
reading, singing…
Abilities
good at dancing, singing…
要求:
1. 覆盖要点,可以合理增加细节;
2. 80词左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.
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Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly.
Mary used to be a shy and quiet girl. She used to get nervous easily and her face often turned red when she spoke with strangers. She liked nothing but reading alone in her free time. However, she has changed a lot since she joined the Buddy Club. Now, Mary is so brave and outgoing that she isn’t afraid of speaking out in public anymore. What’s more, she has lots of hobbies, such as singing, writing, and dancing. She is good at them as well.
People sure change all the time, right? What we should do is to learn from Mary. Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves.
第十二篇:
【写作要求】
以“My Weekend Housework”为题写一篇短文,谈一谈上星期天你做过的家务活,并介绍你喜欢做的家务活和不喜欢做的家务活。用英语写一篇70词左右的短文。要求:内容完整,意思连贯,符合逻辑,表达正确。
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My Weekend Housework
Last Saturday morning, I got up at about seven o’clock. After breakfast, I went to the store and bought some food for the family. I like doing the shopping. I think it’s fun. Then I swept the floor. I didn’t do the laundry and the dishes. I don’t like to do any washing. In the afternoon I cleaned the yard. After that, I folded my clothes and made my bed.
第十三篇:
【写作要求】
实现有效的沟通,建立良好的人际关系,不仅要善于表达,更要善于倾听。请你根据表格中所提供的信息,写一篇题为“Being a Good Listener”的英文演讲稿。
注意:1.词数90左右。短文开头和结尾部分己为你写好,不计入总词数;
2.短文需包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名利人名。
Being a Good Listener
Good afternoon,everyone!
Today I’d like to share my ideas of“Being a Good Listener” with you.
Thank you for your listening!
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Being a Good Listener
Good afternoon, everyone!
Today I’d like to share my ideas of “Being a Good Listener” with you.
Good listening can always show respect and build good relationships with people.
Parents should listen to their children, so they will understand them better and trust each other. Teachers should also listen to their students so that they can increase their understanding and improve relationships. Students should listen to their classmates, then their friendship will be increased and they will help each other.
We’d better be patient while listening. Don’t forget to keep silent while listening. In a word, good listening can really make us get closer to each other.
Thank you for your listening!
第十四篇:
【写作要求】
为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识,提高自我保护能力,某校开展了以”安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。
1.慎重交友 2.遇险报警 3.安全饮食 4. 其他(1-2点)
注意:1)内容必须包括所给的全部要点,可适当发挥
2)表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范;
3)词数80左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:be careful, on line, danger, call...for, go bad
How to keep safe?
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.
First,
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How to keep safe?
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we ought to eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming, and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.
In short, safety must come first!
第十五篇:
【写作要求】
你喜欢阅读吗?请你以 “Reading---A good Habit” 为题写一篇有关阅读的短文。
内容包括:
1. 你的阅读习惯(喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间地点、购书方式等等)。
2. 阅读带给你什么益处(至少两点)。
3. 号召大家都读书。
作文要求:
1. 不能照抄原文,不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数80词左右。
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Reading---A Good Habit
Reading is a very good habit. I like reading very much. In my eyes, I think that forming a good reading habit is necessary for us. It can not only improve our knowledge but also make us think over more different things efficiently.
Besides, we can do some reading every time when we are free. For example, I often read some of my favorite books in my spare time both at home or in the library. What I like most are storybooks because most of them are quite interesting. Now I often buy my favorite books online for its big discount.
Finally, I like to share my favorite books with my family or my classmates. Since reading can benefit us a lot, it’s time for us to have our good reading habit now!