英语88分,考研总分408,一战上岸985,以下是我反复打磨的高分作文模板。
由于今年英语新大纲变动比较大,很多同学比较焦虑,作文考察范围变宽后不知道怎么进行复习,也把握不住复习重点,其实不用过于担心,看这篇文章就够了↓↓↓
根据考纲的变化,所有类型的作文我都制作了相应模板【模板+写作素材】,并标注了重点。
按照我的方法来,大小作文保底22分,基础好的同学可以在此基础上更进一步。
根据最新的考纲,小作文包括书信类、通知、告示、纪要,大作文包括图表类、图画类和文字类。(文末有目录)
第一部分 引言
(一)为什么要用模板
考场上除了英语水平极高的人,其实大部分人临时发挥写出来的作文水平都一般(包括我自己),经常会出现逻辑不通,内容浅显,表达不清楚等问题。而模板的意义就在于框架+素材,能在给你提供保底分数的情况下给予冲刺高分的可能。
(二)关于“反模板”
关于外界流传考研英语会反模板,其实大家不用担心,真正“反”的模板是那些死板、生搬硬套、一眼假的模板。我们的模板十分灵活,框架合理,素材丰富,替换句多,完全不存在这个问题。任何模板放在实际题目中都是需要有变化的。灵活使用一份好的模板,是花少量时间得高分快最好的途径。
(三)作文类型
根据新大纲,今年英语的考察范围为:
1.小作文:书信类、通知、告示、纪要;
2.大作文:图表类、图画类和文字类。
第二部分 大小作文通用框架(具体模板在后面)
一、小作文通用框架
(一)书信类
1.公务书信 |
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【第一段】自我介绍①+写信目的 |
【第二段】过渡句②+关键句③ |
【第三段】重申目的④+期待回信 |
2.私人书信 |
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【第一段】寒暄+写信目的(两句话) |
【第二段】过渡句+关键句(同公务书信) |
【第三段】祝福语/重申目的+期待回信(同公务书信) |
(二)通知类①
通知类作文总体框架: |
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【第一段】明确目的 |
【第二段】过渡句+关键句 |
【第三段】重申目的+更多联系方式② |
①通知一般分为两种:开展活动和招募成员,它们的目的都是呼吁更多人加入。
(三)告示
(四)纪要
(三)、(四)见后面的具体模板
二、大作文通用框架
(一)图表类(英语二重点)
图表作文总体框架: |
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【第一段】 整体描述+具体数据描述2句 (静态/动态) |
【第二段】 过渡句+现象原因论证 (给了八种原因,选2-3种即可) |
【第三段】 结论/预测/评价/建议/措施 (给了十句,根据主题选2句) |
(二)图画类(英语一重点)
图画作文总体框架: |
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【第一段】描述图片信息(总体描述+具体描述) |
【第二段】揭示画面寓意+语料库选角度论证 语料库:原因角度八类(同图表第二段);相关事实5句;反方角度2句;举例论证2句;正负面影响角度(对个人、对社会、对国家、对文化共11句)等。 |
【第三段】归纳评价+建议措施(+期望、呼吁、憧憬未来) |
(三)文字类
文字类作文总体框架: |
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【第一段】总结并改写题目关键句/主题句+说明立场 |
【第二段】表明态度(完全同意/部分同意/完全不同意)+论证(同图画类论证语料库) |
【第三段】总结立场/观点 |
第三部分 小作文具体模板
(一)书信(重点)
书信是最常考察的内容,可以分为以下三种类型:
1、情感类信件:感谢信、道歉信、祝贺信
2、信息类信件:邀请信、推荐信/介绍信/求职信/申请信、投诉信、建议信、辞职信
3、回执函(新增)
【第一段】写信目的(对某人做的某件事表示感谢/歉意/祝贺)
【第二段】过渡句+关键句(细节、具体)
【第三段】重申目的(再次感谢/道歉/祝贺)+期待回信
——书信举例:情感类信件(感谢信、道歉信、祝贺信)
模板中标注①②...的地方表示后面有注释或者替换素材
【第一段】:写信目的(以下是可以替换句子)
(1)I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing/to express my sincere thanks for/apology for/congratulations on... |
(2)I would like to take this opportunity to express my sincere xx to you for... |
(3)I, to be frank, am writing this letter to express my sincere xx for... |
(4)Congratulations on your being admitted to Peking University(升学) /your winning a scholarship(获奖学金)/your landing on your dream job(找到工作)/your promotion(升职)/your moving to a new house that you put so much effort into decorating(搬迁)/your eighteenth birthday(生日)/your recovery from illness(生病恢复身体) and best wishes for the whole year! |
......共8种替换句 |
①原因:事件
1.感谢事件:一般是感谢对方提供的帮助/机会等,题目有时候会写明具体事件,如果题目没有写明,只是说“要感谢xx一直以来对的帮助”,那么第一段也可以先笼统地表达感谢,到第二段再详细编一些内容。
(1)It was you that got me out of a lot of trouble. |
(2)giving me a mass of useful information |
...... |
2.道歉事件:主要是给对方添麻烦了,比如弄丢/弄坏了对方的物品,爽约(缺席某活动/取消某行程)。
(1)breaking your bike/losing the book you lent me yesterday/last week |
(2)my absence from this meeting |
...... |
3.祝贺事件:包括学习/工作/生活上的事件(详细见*第一段写信目的替换句)。
【第二段】关键句
②关键句
1.感谢事件写作方法:描述困难情况+对方提供的帮助+帮助的作用+没有对方帮助的后果
关键句1:描述具体情况:包括但不限于时间、地点、是什么。
(1)Last Wednesday, I collided with a car when I was riding through a crossroads. |
(2)I have been agonizing over how to choose a suitable college in recent weeks. |
...... |
关键句2:对方提供的帮助:物质的帮助或者精神上的帮助(关心关怀、指导鼓励等)。
(1)You were so kind that you took me to the hospital and didn’t leave until my friend arrived. |
(2)You always encourage me to read extensively(广泛阅读)/use lateral thinking(发散型思维) rather than rely on linear thinking(直线型思维), which is good for my academic performance. |
...... |
关键句3:帮助措施所起的作用:一般是“成功完成了某事”、“获得了某经验”、“提供了某种能力”,比如“已经康复”、“已经成功申请到奖学金”、“取得了满意的成绩”等。
(1)Moreover, you have inspired me to maintain a positive outlook and I possess this attribute now.(另外,你鼓励我保持积极的心态,我现在已具备这一特质了。) |
(2)You showed me that people who can speak two languages display greater creativity and problem-solving ability. |
...... |
关键句4:如果没有对方帮助的后果:如果没有对方帮助,自己将无法完成某事。
(1)Without your help, I could not have known the company and colleagues/my shortcomings inside out(透彻了解sth). |
(2)Without your help, I would not have done it so smoothly and successfully. |
...... |
2.道歉事件的关键句包括:描述具体情况(时间、地点、发生了什么、主要原因等)+导致的后果
关键句1:描述具体情况
(1)Unfortunately, I have been informed that my flight had been canceled because of the weather change. So I will arrive a day late. |
(2)It started to rain so heavily on my way back from the library that I had to run. Perhaps it was at the time that I lost your book. |
...... |
关键句2:导致的后果
(1)I’m sorry that you have to adjust the meeting process due to my absence. |
(2)I am fully aware of the irreparable consequences of my ignorance/carelessness. |
...... |
3.祝贺事件的关键句可以包括:对方取得成功的原因+取得成功后将要做的事情(建议)+相信对方可以做到
此处补充一句过渡句:
sth be an arduous but rewarding process某事需要付出艰苦努力但回报也同样丰厚
关键句1:取得成功的原因:可以只写主要原因(一般为自身努力),也可以写“主要+次要原因”。
(1)“对方自身的天赋和努力”:It is your own intelligence and diligence that have earned you this achievement.(强调句型) |
(2)“家人/老师/朋友的支持和帮助”:Furthermore, your classmates’ encouragement when you were stressed out also helped you with your tasks. |
...... |
关键句2:取得成功后将要做的事情:比如会在大学继续学业,会挑战更难的工作等,也可以建议ta下一步做什么。
(1)Furthermore, you will continue to learn more specialized knowledge in university./It is obvious that you will continue to do more difficult work. |
(2)Moreover, you will have the opportunity to meet an army of elite people/to work with mixed-ability students. |
...... |
关键句3:相信对方可以做到
I have no doubt that you can overcome the difficulties.
【第三段】
③措施
1.报答措施:邀请吃饭/去音乐会/以帮助回报对方的帮助等。
(1)Finally, with your permission, I hope to reimburse your assistance. |
(2)I would like to invite you to a popular cafe if you are available next Sunday. |
2.补救措施:买一个新的/尽快修好/尽快赶到/尽快解决/尽快完成
(1)To make amends, I would like to call the staff to fix it/buy a new one for you as soon as possible. |
(3)I'll find a feasible alternative to avoiding other contingencies as soon as possible. |
...... |
3.庆祝措施:聚餐/聚会
(1)To celebrate this wonderful moment, I think it's time to have a party/have dinner together/to Disneyland next Saturday. |
(2)If you are in the mood for celebrating, maybe we can take a memorable graduation trip/we can go to that concert you've been waiting for. |
...... |
第三段结尾:重申目的的表达(再次感谢/道歉/祝贺)
(1)I humbly ask for your forgiveness and hope you can understand my situation. |
(2)And if you need any further information, you can contact me at any time(获取更多信息). |
...... |
信息类信件包括(1)邀请信;(2)推荐信/介绍信/求职信/申请信;(3)投诉信;(4)建议信;(5)辞职信共五种,如下面的邀请信,每个都给了模板,还有新增的回执信,写作方法和素材补充 跟上面情感类信件是一样的方法,具体内容可以看模板文件。
(二)通知类
通知类主要分为两种:1.开展活动;2.招募成员。这里以开展活动的模板为例
具体解释、素材等见模板文件
(三)告示Announcements(新增)
......(具体见模板文件)
(四)纪要(新增,一般为会议纪要)
纪要一般出现在会议场合,主要包括以下信息:
具体格式见模板文件
第四部分 大作文模板
以往大作文中,英语一主要考察的是图画作文,英语二主要考察图表作文,而今年英一和英二的考察范围都变为图画类、图表类、文字类三种。
但是以考试连贯性的惯例来看,考试不会突然出现很大的变化,所以大家可以依旧参考以往的标准,英语一以图画为主,英语二以图表为主,剩下的当然也要掌握,以防万一。
一 、图画类(侧重英语一)
通过对以往真题(2010-2022)的分析,我们可以将大作文分成三类:
1.思辨类(出现8次,近4年都是这类,最重要)
2.问题类(出现3次)
3.褒扬类(出现2次)
图画作文总体框架: |
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【第一段】描述图片信息(总体描述+具体描述) |
【第二段】揭示画面寓意+语料库选角度论证 语料库:原因角度八类(同图表第二段);相关事实5句;反方角度2句;举例论证2句;正负面影响角度(对个人、对社会、对国家、对文化共11句)等。 |
【第三段】归纳评价+建议措施(+期望、呼吁、憧憬未来) |
这三类都可以按照三段式的方法来写,但是不同类型的具体内容不同,下面分别是三种不同类型的思路和语料:
(一)思辨类
这种类型图画体现出来的是一种道理,具有思辨性,有时要从正反两个角度来论证,总体思路如下:
第一段:描述图片信息(2句)
1.描述图片(主角+动作)
(1)The picture\drawing\photo\visual representation above vividly\symbolically\subtly\humorously illustrates\demonstrates\shows\reflects\describes\depicts\represents\portrays\reveals +名词\that......(宾语从句描述图画) |
(2)Below/Beside the drawing, there is a caption which indicates......(有小标题的图) |
(3)The title/subtitle indicate.......(有小标题的) |
...... |
2.描述图片常用句式:
(1)当画面主体在做两个同时进行的动作时
Faced with sth./Facing sth., sb. is doing sth.,while another man/one is doing sth.. |
In the picture,there are two _____ with different attitudes to _____ . More exactly,one of them_____,whereas the other ______ |
...... |
(2)当出现两幅对比的图片时
In one picture,there is/are sth./表语从句. On the contrary/by comparison/in contrast/alternatively/conversely/instead, in the other picture,there is/are sth./表语从句. |
As is shown above,in the left picture,there is/are .......,who\which attempts to do sth. By contrast,in the right picture, the other one is doing sth. |
...... |
(3)当画面描述某人在做一件事情时
Sb/sth be done(被动语态),which+定语从句(修饰前面的句子) 例句:She is noticed by her teacher,which makes her happy. |
It seems rather +adj to present people/sth+后置定语或者定于从句+when they attempt to do sth. |
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第二段(5句左右,语料库)
1.揭示画面寓意1句
(1)Simple as the picture is, it does demonstrate a status quo which is worthy of our attention and discussion+that+陈述画面寓意的句子(主题值得探讨和注意的现象时使用) |
(2)Despite a little exaggeration, there is a deeper meaning behind the picture that+同位语从句修饰meaning(大部分情况都可以用) |
(3)Upon critically analyzing this photo,most individuals would agree\believe\hold that ......is a contentious issue which needs additional consideration.(主题有争议的情况下使用) |
......(共12句) |
2.论证语料库(3-5句)▲▲▲
----原因角度(同图表第二段):
1.社会:
(1)With globalization/the aging population/rapid urbanization,sth. is extremely affecting sb.(students/adolescents),which leads to+后果(名词或者宾语从句) 例句:With the aging population,pensions crisis is extremely affecting people,which leads to a heavy burden on the younger generation. |
(2)Owing to the quickening pace of life, sth. is stimulating everyone to do sth.(生活节奏加快) |
...... |
2.经济
(1)The turbulent business environment and the unstoppable technological progress have accounted for the unpredictability of the job market.(increasingly fierce competition)(经济不景气、科技不断发展) |
(2)Initially, there is no doubt that recent years have witnessed the rapid development of the economy, and people’s living standards have been improved remarkably, as a result of which, an increasing number of people are likely to……(经济向好发展) |
...... |
3.科技发展:
(1)Secondly,the evidence that+句子(科技进步的证据)+ manifests that there have been rapid advances in technology. Result from technological advancements, +句子表示科技进步的结果…… |
(2)Like the internet, sth have/has brought lots of convenience to our lives.(可以是某种科技,也可以是让人生活便利的制度、习俗等) |
...... |
4.环境;5. 政策;6. 人们观念改变;7.人们意识不足;8.人的需求变化......
----相关事实:
(1)There is no denying the fact that+同位语从句修饰fact |
(2)Among all the touching facts related to this topic that I have noticed and experienced, the most impressive one is+名词词组/表语从句 |
...... |
----反方角度:先提出反方观点,再提出自己的观点对反方观点进行驳斥或者补充
(1)It is true that +主语从句, namely, +与前面句子相同的意思相同的成分. And it also goes without saying that +主语从句. But does this mean that +句子? 例句:It is true that we can gain trust when we simply tell the truth,namely,just be in some specific moment,it will be better for us to tell a white it also goes without saying that when it comes to our own weakness,honesty is the best for long-term cooperation and relationships. But does this mean that we should just tell the truth in any situation? |
(2)It is +adj for sb. to do sth.,although+反方观点 |
...... |
----举例论证:
(1)The importance 某个名人 attaches to 某种品质 has played an irreplaceable role in his / her remarkable achievements so far such as名人的成就(需要用名词性成分) |
(2)Take sb./sth. as an example.+实例(某人/某事为例) |
...... |
----影响角度(正负面):
(1)对个人:For a person ,one’s living surroundings(或替换成其它名词:性格,发展,身体健康,寿命,职业,兴趣,多样性,幸福 character/ development/ good health/ life/ occupation/ interest/ diversity/happiness) will be greatly influenced and even reshaped by his characteristics and life habits(可以换成主题词,正面和负面的主题词都可以) |
(2)对社会:For society,because of+主题词,there will be a harmonious and prosperous phenomenon,which is conducive to building a beautiful future.(对社会的正面影响) |
(3)对国家;(4)对文化的影响;(5)(6)(7)...... |
第三段(2-3句话)
1.归纳评论
(1)As far as I am concerned…itself is not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from…as long as we take a good control over them. |
(2)All in all, obviously, this picture inspires us to explore the deep meaning of…(主题) |
...... |
2.建议措施
(1)From my personal perspective,while we are enjoying the benefits brought by…,we should keep a watching eye on those negative practices. |
...... |
3.表达期许(或总结观点、发出呼吁)
(1)Only by doing so can our society be more harmonious,our economy be more prosperous and we ,as individuals,embrace more promising prospect. |
...... |
(二)问题类
(三)褒扬类
这两类结构上与第一类差不多,为防止篇幅过长就不展开了,具体见模板文件
二、图表类(侧重英语二)
目前来说,三段论是图表类作文最简单合理的写法
简单来说第一段主要描述图中数据,第二段解释表中所显示现象的原因,第三段为总结。
整体的结构其实大家都能把握,但是,想要得一个不错的分数,细节很重要。第一段要用什么形式的句子才能描述好数据的变化?第二段要用什么样的原因来解释?原因怎么写才能显得不敷衍?第三段改怎么总结?除了总结还要写什么东西?等等这些都是我们模板中要解决的问题。
那下面,看看我是怎么做的
分类:所有图表作文题目大体可以分为两种类型,一个是数据随时间变化的动态图,另一个是某一时间段不同对象占比或绝对数量的静态图。
这两类题目在写作时主要的区别在于第一段怎么写,动态图需要描述数据随时间变化的变化趋势,而静态图则需要描写在一定时间内不同对象的占比或数量(对比)。 所以我在模板中根据两类不同的作文题目给出了第一段的两种写法。
图表作文总体框架: |
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【第一段】 整体描述+具体数据描述2句 (静态/动态) |
【第二段】 过渡句+现象原因论证 (给了八种原因,选2-3种即可) |
【第三段】 结论/预测/评价/建议/措施 (给了十句,根据主题选2句) |
在大作文模板中,只有第一段是不相同的,二三段可以通用。
(一)第一段(动态/静态)
第一段一般三句话即可,主要是说明主题(第1句)+描述数据(2、3句),他们的区别是动态图描述数据时要体现数据的变化,静态图则要体现数据的对比。第一段一般写2-3句为佳。
如动态图:
而静态图在描述数据时要注意的一点是要区分数据是占比还是数量(2、3句都要),如第3句:
(二)第二段——原因
我在模板中给出了通用的一些原因,如社会、经济、科技、环境、政策、人们观念变化、人们意识不足、人们的需求变化。这些原因基本可以解释真题的所有现象,所以只需要这一个模板就可以保证基本适用所有题目。
但是如果你想要更加细致切题,那么在第二段需要多准备一些参考句式,这样你就可以根据不同的情况进行套用。(我的模板里面说明了每个句式的用法,并配有例句)
1.社会:
(1)With globalization/the aging population/rapid urbanization,sth. is extremely affecting sb.(students/adolescents),which leads to+后果(名词或者宾语从句) 例句:With the aging population,pensions crisis is extremely affecting people,which leads to a heavy burden on the younger generation. |
(2)Owing to the quickening pace of life, sth. is stimulating everyone to do sth.(生活节奏加快) |
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2.经济
(1)The turbulent business environment and the unstoppable technological progress have accounted for the unpredictability of the job market.(increasingly fierce competition)(经济不景气、科技不断发展) |
(2)Initially, there is no doubt that recent years have witnessed the rapid development of the economy, and people’s living standards have been improved remarkably, as a result of which, an increasing number of people are likely to……(经济向好发展) |
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3.科技发展:
(1)Secondly,the evidence that+句子(科技进步的证据)+ manifests that there have been rapid advances in technology. Result from technological advancements, +句子表示科技进步的结果…… |
(2)Like the internet, sth have/has brought lots of convenience to our lives.(可以是某种科技,也可以是让人生活便利的制度、习俗等) |
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4.环境;5. 政策;6. 人们观念改变;7.人们意识不足;8.人的需求变化......
每种原因都给了很多句子
参考句式:
(1)It can be said that it is + adj + for sb. to do sth (用于形容对某人来说做某事怎么样,可用来写某一原因) 例句:It can be said that it is quite difficult for people to make an appointment with friends or join a group to do physical exercise. |
(2)It is common knowledge that……(后面加上一个陈述事实的句子) 例句:It is common knowledge that people prefer to live in cities and towns for the convenience of the transportation system. |
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(三)第三段——总结
可以从两个方面描写,一是结合自己的看法预测将来的趋势,或对现象进行评价,二是根据预测给出建议和措施。第三段我给了10个句子,可以根据题目来*组合(2句即可),十分灵活,举例:
(1)Taking all these factors into consideration, we may predict that with the quickening pace of …… and ever-increasing ……, the number of …… will keep growing(falling, unchanged) in the forthcoming decade.(预测趋势) |
(2)From the analysis above, a conclusion can be drawn safely that the trend of……may become more prevalent(is inevitable) in the future.(预测趋势) |
(3)As is known to us all,……is/are to……as water and air are to the normal growth of all creatures.(比喻,放在最后强调重要性) |
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三、文字类
文字类是今年新增的题型,这类题目给我们一段文字,要求我们首先能够提炼文段的观点,并且要表态自己在何种程度上同意文中的观点,并且给出论据来支持你的观点。
此类题型的难点首先在提炼出文段的观点,A导致B,B导致C,然后你要表达你的态度和观点,可以是支持A导致B,B导致C两个命题都正确;可以是反对,反对则确定其中一个命题错误即可——可以是同意A导致B,反对B导致C;可以是反对A导致B,同意B导致C;可以是反对A导致B,B导致C;然后举例进行论证。
文字类作文总体框架: |
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【第一段】总结并改写题目关键句/主题句+说明立场 |
【第二段】表明态度(完全同意/部分同意/完全不同意)+论证(同图画类论证语料库) |
【第三段】总结立场/观点 |
(一) 第一段(总结+说明立场)
1.总结文段中的信息点,改写文中关键句/主题句
Many Cities have vehicle-free days, when people are required or encouraged to take a bus,cycle or travel by taxi.(以下是改写方法)
(1)主动改被动:Traveling by bus, cycling or using the taxi service is promoted in some cities on vehicle-free days,When people are not allowed to drive cars. |
(2)用there be句型:There are cities which promote different forms of transport such as taking a bus,traveling by bike and taking a taxi on vehicle-free day. |
(3)强调句...... |
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2.说明自己的立场
可以选择的立场包括完全支持、完全反对、部分支持和部分反对。注意扣题,要出现关键词!
(1)I strongly/completely/totally/firmly/personally/deeply believe/agree that...... |
(2)I basically/largely/partly/ agree that......although...... |
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(二)第二段(表明态度+论证)
主要有三种态度:完全同意\部分同意\完全不同意,主要是进行论证
具体论证内容参照图画类图画作文-思辨类-第二段(这是个语料库)。
(三)第三段(总结)
总结自己的立场,扣题的同时用词不要重复。
(1)In conclusion,i believe that+自身观点总结 |
(2)To summarize,while i understand that +反方观点,i would argue that+自身观点 |
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第五部分 主题词
很多同学都害怕自己上了考场,写作文的时候想不起来这个作文的中心词/主题词。针对这种情况,我参考时事热点,分类整理了几百个作文的主题词,例如:
老龄问题;社会保障 social security medical care;population explosion; the aging problems
老龄化社会 the aged society
人口老龄化 population aging
计划生育ZC the family planning policy/ the one-child policy
志愿者/志愿者活 动/志愿服务 volunteer/volunteering/volunteering service
低碳生活 low carbon lifestyles
家庭教育 family education
内卷 involution
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此外,大家还可以像我一样去补充一些常见词汇的高级替换(介词、连词、形容词、副词),例如:
Firstly: previously, beforehand, foremost, initially, originally, formerly, principally, mainly, essentially, basically, generally, commonly, universally, on the whole, fundamentally, to begin with, to start with, first of all, at the outset...
Then: subsequently, afterward, thereafter, after that, succeeding (adj), secondarily, what is more, furthermore (further more)...
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