24考研英语一作文模板(保底22分!)

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24考研英语一作文模板(保底22分!)

英语88分,考研总分408一战上岸985,以下是我反复打磨的高分作文模板。

由于今年英语新大纲变动比较大,很多同学比较焦虑,作文考察范围变宽后不知道怎么进行复习,也把握不住复习重点,其实不用过于担心,看这篇文章就够了↓↓↓

根据考纲的变化,所有类型的作文我都制作了相应模板【模板+写作素材】,并标注了重点。

按照我的方法来,大小作文保底22分,基础好的同学可以在此基础上更进一步。

根据最新的考纲,小作文包括书信类、通知、告示、纪要,大作文包括图表类、图画类和文字类。(文末有目录)

第一部分 引言

(一)为什么要用模板

考场上除了英语水平极高的人,其实大部分人临时发挥写出来的作文水平都一般(包括我自己),经常会出现逻辑不通,内容浅显,表达不清楚等问题。而模板的意义就在于框架+素材,能在给你提供保底分数的情况下给予冲刺高分的可能。

(二)关于“反模板”

关于外界流传考研英语会反模板,其实大家不用担心,真正“反”的模板是那些死板、生搬硬套、一眼假的模板。我们的模板十分灵活,框架合理,素材丰富,替换句多,完全不存在这个问题。任何模板放在实际题目中都是需要有变化的。灵活使用一份好的模板,是花少量时间得高分快最好的途径。

(三)作文类型

根据新大纲,今年英语的考察范围为:

1.小作文:书信类、通知、告示、纪要;

2.大作文:图表类、图画类和文字类。


第二部分 大小作文通用框架(具体模板在后面)

一、小作文通用框架

(一)书信类

1.公务书信
【第一段】自我介绍①+写信目的
【第二段】过渡句②+关键句③
【第三段】重申目的④+期待回信
2.私人书信
【第一段】寒暄+写信目的(两句话)
【第二段】过渡句+关键句(同公务书信)
【第三段】祝福语/重申目的+期待回信(同公务书信)

(二)通知类①

通知类作文总体框架:
【第一段】明确目的
【第二段】过渡句+关键句
【第三段】重申目的+更多联系方式②

①通知一般分为两种:开展活动和招募成员,它们的目的都是呼吁更多人加入。

(三)告示

(四)纪要

(三)、(四)见后面的具体模板

二、大作文通用框架

(一)图表类(英语二重点)


图表作文总体框架:
【第一段】 整体描述+具体数据描述2句 (静态/动态)
【第二段】 过渡句+现象原因论证 (给了八种原因,选2-3种即可)
【第三段】 结论/预测/评价/建议/措施 (给了十句,根据主题选2句)

(二)图画类(英语一重点)

图画作文总体框架:
【第一段】描述图片信息(总体描述+具体描述)
【第二段】揭示画面寓意+语料库选角度论证
语料库:原因角度八类(同图表第二段);相关事实5句;反方角度2句;举例论证2句;正负面影响角度(对个人、对社会、对国家、对文化共11句)等。
【第三段】归纳评价+建议措施(+期望、呼吁、憧憬未来)

(三)文字类

文字类作文总体框架:
【第一段】总结并改写题目关键句/主题句+说明立场
【第二段】表明态度(完全同意/部分同意/完全不同意)+论证(同图画类论证语料库)
【第三段】总结立场/观点

第三部分 小作文具体模板

(一)书信(重点)

书信是最常考察的内容,可以分为以下三种类型:

1、情感类信件:感谢信、道歉信、祝贺信

2、信息类信件:邀请信、推荐信/介绍信/求职信/申请信、投诉信、建议信、辞职信

3、回执函(新增)

【第一段】写信目的(对某人做的某件事表示感谢/歉意/祝贺)

【第二段】过渡句+关键句(细节、具体)

【第三段】重申目的(再次感谢/道歉/祝贺)+期待回信

——书信举例:情感类信件(感谢信、道歉信、祝贺信)

模板中标注①②...的地方表示后面有注释或者替换素材

【第一段】:写信目的(以下是可以替换句子)

(1)I am writing this letter for the purpose of expressing/to express my sincere thanks for/apology for/congratulations on...
(2)I would like to take this opportunity to express my sincere xx to you for...
(3)I, to be frank, am writing this letter to express my sincere xx for...
(4)Congratulations on your being admitted to Peking University(升学) /your winning a scholarship(获奖学金)/your landing on your dream job(找到工作)/your promotion(升职)/your moving to a new house that you put so much effort into decorating(搬迁)/your eighteenth birthday(生日)/your recovery from illness(生病恢复身体) and best wishes for the whole year!
......共8种替换句

①原因:事件

1.感谢事件:一般是感谢对方提供的帮助/机会等,题目有时候会写明具体事件,如果题目没有写明,只是说“要感谢xx一直以来对的帮助”,那么第一段也可以先笼统地表达感谢,到第二段再详细编一些内容。

(1)It was you that got me out of a lot of trouble.
(2)giving me a mass of useful information
......

2.道歉事件:主要是给对方添麻烦了,比如弄丢/弄坏了对方的物品,爽约(缺席某活动/取消某行程)。

(1)breaking your bike/losing the book you lent me yesterday/last week
(2)my absence from this meeting
......

3.祝贺事件:包括学习/工作/生活上的事件(详细见*第一段写信目的替换句)。

【第二段】关键句

②关键句

1.感谢事件写作方法:描述困难情况+对方提供的帮助+帮助的作用+没有对方帮助的后果

关键句1:描述具体情况:包括但不限于时间、地点、是什么。

(1)Last Wednesday, I collided with a car when I was riding through a crossroads.
(2)I have been agonizing over how to choose a suitable college in recent weeks.
......

关键句2:对方提供的帮助:物质的帮助或者精神上的帮助(关心关怀、指导鼓励等)。

(1)You were so kind that you took me to the hospital and didn’t leave until my friend arrived.
(2)You always encourage me to read extensively(广泛阅读)/use lateral thinking(发散型思维) rather than rely on linear thinking(直线型思维), which is good for my academic performance.
......

关键句3:帮助措施所起的作用:一般是“成功完成了某事”、“获得了某经验”、“提供了某种能力”,比如“已经康复”、“已经成功申请到奖学金”、“取得了满意的成绩”等。

(1)Moreover, you have inspired me to maintain a positive outlook and I possess this attribute now.(另外,你鼓励我保持积极的心态,我现在已具备这一特质了。)
(2)You showed me that people who can speak two languages display greater creativity and problem-solving ability.
......

关键句4:如果没有对方帮助的后果:如果没有对方帮助,自己将无法完成某事。

(1)Without your help, I could not have known the company and colleagues/my shortcomings inside out(透彻了解sth).
(2)Without your help, I would not have done it so smoothly and successfully.
......

2.道歉事件的关键句包括:描述具体情况(时间、地点、发生了什么、主要原因等)+导致的后果

关键句1:描述具体情况

(1)Unfortunately, I have been informed that my flight had been canceled because of the weather change. So I will arrive a day late.
(2)It started to rain so heavily on my way back from the library that I had to run. Perhaps it was at the time that I lost your book.
......

关键句2:导致的后果

(1)I’m sorry that you have to adjust the meeting process due to my absence.
(2)I am fully aware of the irreparable consequences of my ignorance/carelessness.
......

3.祝贺事件的关键句可以包括:对方取得成功的原因+取得成功后将要做的事情(建议)+相信对方可以做到

此处补充一句过渡句:

sth be an arduous but rewarding process某事需要付出艰苦努力但回报也同样丰厚

关键句1:取得成功的原因:可以只写主要原因(一般为自身努力),也可以写“主要+次要原因”。

(1)“对方自身的天赋和努力”:It is your own intelligence and diligence that have earned you this achievement.(强调句型)
(2)“家人/老师/朋友的支持和帮助”:Furthermore, your classmates’ encouragement when you were stressed out also helped you with your tasks.
......

关键句2:取得成功后将要做的事情:比如会在大学继续学业,会挑战更难的工作等,也可以建议ta下一步做什么。

(1)Furthermore, you will continue to learn more specialized knowledge in university./It is obvious that you will continue to do more difficult work.
(2)Moreover, you will have the opportunity to meet an army of elite people/to work with mixed-ability students.
......

关键句3:相信对方可以做到

I have no doubt that you can overcome the difficulties.

【第三段】

③措施

1.报答措施:邀请吃饭/去音乐会/以帮助回报对方的帮助等。

(1)Finally, with your permission, I hope to reimburse your assistance.
(2)I would like to invite you to a popular cafe if you are available next Sunday.

2.补救措施:买一个新的/尽快修好/尽快赶到/尽快解决/尽快完成

(1)To make amends, I would like to call the staff to fix it/buy a new one for you as soon as possible.
(3)I'll find a feasible alternative to avoiding other contingencies as soon as possible.
......

3.庆祝措施:聚餐/聚会

(1)To celebrate this wonderful moment, I think it's time to have a party/have dinner together/to Disneyland next Saturday.
(2)If you are in the mood for celebrating, maybe we can take a memorable graduation trip/we can go to that concert you've been waiting for.
......

第三段结尾:重申目的的表达(再次感谢/道歉/祝贺)

(1)I humbly ask for your forgiveness and hope you can understand my situation.
(2)And if you need any further information, you can contact me at any time(获取更多信息).
......


信息类信件包括(1)邀请信;(2)推荐信/介绍信/求职信/申请信;(3)投诉信;(4)建议信;(5)辞职信共五种,如下面的邀请信,每个都给了模板,还有新增的回执信,写作方法和素材补充 跟上面情感类信件是一样的方法,具体内容可以看模板文件。

(二)通知类

通知类主要分为两种:1.开展活动;2.招募成员。这里以开展活动的模板为例

具体解释、素材等见模板文件

(三)告示Announcements(新增)

......(具体见模板文件)

(四)纪要(新增,一般为会议纪要)

纪要一般出现在会议场合,主要包括以下信息:

具体格式见模板文件


第四部分 大作文模板

以往大作文中,英语一主要考察的是图画作文,英语二主要考察图表作文,而今年英一和英二的考察范围都变为图画类、图表类、文字类三种。

但是以考试连贯性的惯例来看,考试不会突然出现很大的变化,所以大家可以依旧参考以往的标准,英语一以图画为主,英语二以图表为主,剩下的当然也要掌握,以防万一。

一 、图画类(侧重英语一)

通过对以往真题(2010-2022)的分析,我们可以将大作文分成三类:

1.思辨类(出现8次,近4年都是这类,最重要)

2.问题类(出现3次)

3.褒扬类(出现2次)

图画作文总体框架:
【第一段】描述图片信息(总体描述+具体描述)
【第二段】揭示画面寓意+语料库选角度论证
语料库:原因角度八类(同图表第二段);相关事实5句;反方角度2句;举例论证2句;正负面影响角度(对个人、对社会、对国家、对文化共11句)等。
【第三段】归纳评价+建议措施(+期望、呼吁、憧憬未来)

这三类都可以按照三段式的方法来写,但是不同类型的具体内容不同,下面分别是三种不同类型的思路和语料:

(一)思辨类

这种类型图画体现出来的是一种道理,具有思辨性,有时要从正反两个角度来论证,总体思路如下:

第一段:描述图片信息(2句)

1.描述图片(主角+动作)

(1)The picture\drawing\photo\visual representation above vividly\symbolically\subtly\humorously illustrates\demonstrates\shows\reflects\describes\depicts\represents\portrays\reveals +名词\that......(宾语从句描述图画)
(2)Below/Beside the drawing, there is a caption which indicates......(有小标题的图)
(3)The title/subtitle indicate.......(有小标题的)
......

2.描述图片常用句式:

(1)当画面主体在做两个同时进行的动作时

Faced with sth./Facing sth., sb. is doing sth.,while another man/one is doing sth..
In the picture,there are two _____ with different attitudes to _____ . More exactly,one of them_____,whereas the other ______
......

(2)当出现两幅对比的图片时

In one picture,there is/are sth./表语从句. On the contrary/by comparison/in contrast/alternatively/conversely/instead, in the other picture,there is/are sth./表语从句.
As is shown above,in the left picture,there is/are .......,who\which attempts to do sth. By contrast,in the right picture, the other one is doing sth.
......

(3)当画面描述某人在做一件事情时

Sb/sth be done(被动语态),which+定语从句(修饰前面的句子) 例句:She is noticed by her teacher,which makes her happy.
It seems rather +adj to present people/sth+后置定语或者定于从句+when they attempt to do sth.
......

第二段(5句左右,语料库)

1.揭示画面寓意1句

(1)Simple as the picture is, it does demonstrate a status quo which is worthy of our attention and discussion+that+陈述画面寓意的句子(主题值得探讨和注意的现象时使用)
(2)Despite a little exaggeration, there is a deeper meaning behind the picture that+同位语从句修饰meaning(大部分情况都可以用)
(3)Upon critically analyzing this photo,most individuals would agree\believe\hold that ......is a contentious issue which needs additional consideration.(主题有争议的情况下使用)
......(共12句)

2.论证语料库(3-5句)▲▲▲

----原因角度(同图表第二段):

1.社会:

(1)With globalization/the aging population/rapid urbanization,sth. is extremely affecting sb.(students/adolescents),which leads to+后果(名词或者宾语从句)
例句:With the aging population,pensions crisis is extremely affecting people,which leads to a heavy burden on the younger generation.
(2)Owing to the quickening pace of life, sth. is stimulating everyone to do sth.(生活节奏加快)
......

2.经济

(1)The turbulent business environment and the unstoppable technological progress have accounted for the unpredictability of the job market.(increasingly fierce competition)(经济不景气、科技不断发展)
(2)Initially, there is no doubt that recent years have witnessed the rapid development of the economy, and people’s living standards have been improved remarkably, as a result of which, an increasing number of people are likely to……(经济向好发展)
......

3.科技发展:

(1)Secondly,the evidence that+句子(科技进步的证据)+ manifests that there have been rapid advances in technology. Result from technological advancements, +句子表示科技进步的结果……
(2)Like the internet, sth have/has brought lots of convenience to our lives.(可以是某种科技,也可以是让人生活便利的制度、习俗等)
......

4.环境;5. 政策;6. 人们观念改变;7.人们意识不足;8.人的需求变化......

----相关事实:

(1)There is no denying the fact that+同位语从句修饰fact
(2)Among all the touching facts related to this topic that I have noticed and experienced, the most impressive one is+名词词组/表语从句
......

----反方角度:先提出反方观点,再提出自己的观点对反方观点进行驳斥或者补充

(1)It is true that +主语从句, namely, +与前面句子相同的意思相同的成分. And it also goes without saying that +主语从句. But does this mean that +句子?
例句:It is true that we can gain trust when we simply tell the truth,namely,just be in some specific moment,it will be better for us to tell a white it also goes without saying that when it comes to our own weakness,honesty is the best for long-term cooperation and relationships. But does this mean that we should just tell the truth in any situation?
(2)It is +adj for sb. to do sth.,although+反方观点
......

----举例论证:

(1)The importance 某个名人 attaches to 某种品质 has played an irreplaceable role in his / her remarkable achievements so far such as名人的成就(需要用名词性成分)
(2)Take sb./sth. as an example.+实例(某人/某事为例)
......

----影响角度(正负面):

(1)对个人:For a person ,one’s living surroundings(或替换成其它名词:性格,发展,身体健康,寿命,职业,兴趣,多样性,幸福 character/ development/ good health/ life/ occupation/ interest/ diversity/happiness) will be greatly influenced and even reshaped by his characteristics and life habits(可以换成主题词,正面和负面的主题词都可以)
(2)对社会:For society,because of+主题词,there will be a harmonious and prosperous phenomenon,which is conducive to building a beautiful future.(对社会的正面影响)
(3)对国家;(4)对文化的影响;(5)(6)(7)......

第三段(2-3句话)

1.归纳评论

(1)As far as I am concerned…itself is not good or bad and we can benefit a lot from…as long as we take a good control over them.
(2)All in all, obviously, this picture inspires us to explore the deep meaning of…(主题)
......

2.建议措施

(1)From my personal perspective,while we are enjoying the benefits brought by…,we should keep a watching eye on those negative practices.
......

3.表达期许(或总结观点、发出呼吁)

(1)Only by doing so can our society be more harmonious,our economy be more prosperous and we ,as individuals,embrace more promising prospect.
......

(二)问题类

(三)褒扬类

这两类结构上与第一类差不多,为防止篇幅过长就不展开了,具体见模板文件


二、图表类(侧重英语二)

目前来说,三段论是图表类作文最简单合理的写法

简单来说第一段主要描述图中数据,第二段解释表中所显示现象的原因,第三段为总结

整体的结构其实大家都能把握,但是,想要得一个不错的分数,细节很重要。第一段要用什么形式的句子才能描述好数据的变化?第二段要用什么样的原因来解释?原因怎么写才能显得不敷衍?第三段改怎么总结?除了总结还要写什么东西?等等这些都是我们模板中要解决的问题。

那下面,看看我是怎么做的

分类:所有图表作文题目大体可以分为两种类型,一个是数据随时间变化的动态图,另一个是某一时间段不同对象占比或绝对数量的静态图

这两类题目在写作时主要的区别在于第一段怎么写,动态图需要描述数据随时间变化的变化趋势,而静态图则需要描写在一定时间内不同对象的占比或数量(对比)。 所以我在模板中根据两类不同的作文题目给出了第一段的两种写法。

图表作文总体框架:
【第一段】 整体描述+具体数据描述2句 (静态/动态)
【第二段】 过渡句+现象原因论证 (给了八种原因,选2-3种即可)
【第三段】 结论/预测/评价/建议/措施 (给了十句,根据主题选2句)

在大作文模板中,只有第一段是不相同的,二三段可以通用。

(一)第一段(动态/静态)

第一段一般三句话即可,主要是说明主题(第1句)+描述数据(2、3句),他们的区别是动态图描述数据时要体现数据的变化,静态图则要体现数据的对比。第一段一般写2-3句为佳。

动态图:

静态图在描述数据时要注意的一点是要区分数据是占比还是数量(2、3句都要),如第3句:

(二)第二段——原因

我在模板中给出了通用的一些原因,如社会、经济、科技、环境、政策、人们观念变化、人们意识不足、人们的需求变化这些原因基本可以解释真题的所有现象,所以只需要这一个模板就可以保证基本适用所有题目。

但是如果你想要更加细致切题,那么在第二段需要多准备一些参考句式,这样你就可以根据不同的情况进行套用。(我的模板里面说明了每个句式的用法,并配有例句)

1.社会:

(1)With globalization/the aging population/rapid urbanization,sth. is extremely affecting sb.(students/adolescents),which leads to+后果(名词或者宾语从句)
例句:With the aging population,pensions crisis is extremely affecting people,which leads to a heavy burden on the younger generation.
(2)Owing to the quickening pace of life, sth. is stimulating everyone to do sth.(生活节奏加快)
......

2.经济

(1)The turbulent business environment and the unstoppable technological progress have accounted for the unpredictability of the job market.(increasingly fierce competition)(经济不景气、科技不断发展)
(2)Initially, there is no doubt that recent years have witnessed the rapid development of the economy, and people’s living standards have been improved remarkably, as a result of which, an increasing number of people are likely to……(经济向好发展)
......

3.科技发展:

(1)Secondly,the evidence that+句子(科技进步的证据)+ manifests that there have been rapid advances in technology. Result from technological advancements, +句子表示科技进步的结果……
(2)Like the internet, sth have/has brought lots of convenience to our lives.(可以是某种科技,也可以是让人生活便利的制度、习俗等)
......

4.环境;5. 政策;6. 人们观念改变;7.人们意识不足;8.人的需求变化......

每种原因都给了很多句子

参考句式:

(1)It can be said that it is + adj + for sb. to do sth (用于形容对某人来说做某事怎么样,可用来写某一原因)
例句:It can be said that it is quite difficult for people to make an appointment with friends or join a group to do physical exercise.
(2)It is common knowledge that……(后面加上一个陈述事实的句子)
例句:It is common knowledge that people prefer to live in cities and towns for the convenience of the transportation system.
......

(三)第三段——总结

可以从两个方面描写,一是结合自己的看法预测将来的趋势,或对现象进行评价,二是根据预测给出建议和措施。第三段我给了10个句子,可以根据题目来*组合(2句即可),十分灵活,举例:

(1)Taking all these factors into consideration, we may predict that with the quickening pace of …… and ever-increasing ……, the number of …… will keep growing(falling, unchanged) in the forthcoming decade.(预测趋势)
(2)From the analysis above, a conclusion can be drawn safely that the trend of……may become more prevalent(is inevitable) in the future.(预测趋势)
(3)As is known to us all,……is/are to……as water and air are to the normal growth of all creatures.(比喻,放在最后强调重要性)
......

三、文字类

文字类是今年新增的题型,这类题目给我们一段文字,要求我们首先能够提炼文段的观点,并且要表态自己在何种程度上同意文中的观点,并且给出论据来支持你的观点。

此类题型的难点首先在提炼出文段的观点,A导致B,B导致C,然后你要表达你的态度和观点,可以是支持A导致B,B导致C两个命题都正确;可以是反对,反对则确定其中一个命题错误即可——可以是同意A导致B,反对B导致C;可以是反对A导致B,同意B导致C;可以是反对A导致B,B导致C;然后举例进行论证。

文字类作文总体框架:
【第一段】总结并改写题目关键句/主题句+说明立场
【第二段】表明态度(完全同意/部分同意/完全不同意)+论证(同图画类论证语料库)
【第三段】总结立场/观点

(一) 第一段(总结+说明立场)

1.总结文段中的信息点,改写文中关键句/主题句

Many Cities have vehicle-free days, when people are required or encouraged to take a bus,cycle or travel by taxi.(以下是改写方法)

(1)主动改被动:Traveling by bus, cycling or using the taxi service is promoted in some cities on vehicle-free days,When people are not allowed to drive cars.
(2)用there be句型:There are cities which promote different forms of transport such as taking a bus,traveling by bike and taking a taxi on vehicle-free day.
(3)强调句......
......

2.说明自己的立场

可以选择的立场包括完全支持、完全反对、部分支持和部分反对。注意扣题,要出现关键词!

(1)I strongly/completely/totally/firmly/personally/deeply believe/agree that......
(2)I basically/largely/partly/ agree that......although......
......

(二)第二段(表明态度+论证)

主要有三种态度:完全同意\部分同意\完全不同意,主要是进行论证

具体论证内容参照图画类图画作文-思辨类-第二段(这是个语料库)。

(三)第三段(总结)

总结自己的立场,扣题的同时用词不要重复。

(1)In conclusion,i believe that+自身观点总结
(2)To summarize,while i understand that +反方观点,i would argue that+自身观点
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第五部分 主题词

很多同学都害怕自己上了考场,写作文的时候想不起来这个作文的中心词/主题词。针对这种情况,我参考时事热点,分类整理了几百个作文的主题词,例如:

老龄问题;社会保障 social security medical care;population explosion; the aging problems
老龄化社会 the aged society
人口老龄化 population aging
计划生育ZC the family planning policy/ the one-child policy
志愿者/志愿者活 动/志愿服务 volunteer/volunteering/volunteering service
低碳生活 low carbon lifestyles
家庭教育 family education
内卷 involution
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此外,大家还可以像我一样去补充一些常见词汇的高级替换(介词、连词、形容词、副词),例如:

Firstly: previously, beforehand, foremost, initially, originally, formerly, principally, mainly, essentially, basically, generally, commonly, universally, on the whole, fundamentally, to begin with, to start with, first of all, at the outset...
Then: subsequently, afterward, thereafter, after that, succeeding (adj), secondarily, what is more, furthermore (further more)...
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